我剛做的簡(jiǎn)報(bào)需要一些意見(jiàn)。
It was good overall. But you need to make some small changes.
它整體來(lái)講是好的。不過(guò)你還需要做一些小小的更改。
What would you suggest?
你建議怎么做呢?
I would put the production information before the cost so that it sounds justified.
我會(huì)把產(chǎn)品介紹放在價(jià)格之前,讓它聽(tīng)起來(lái)比較合理一點(diǎn)。
presentation n.提供;外觀;贈(zèng)送(儀式);報(bào)告;表演
justified adj.證明有理由的,合理的